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base again by :iconlaviathan66:
Professor Palladium won't stop staring rudely at the preggo Professor Avalon, which is now irking Avalon!
Professor Avalon*preggo and irked at Palladium*: Palladium, I'm warning you now...Stop staring or I'm going to PUNCH YOU!
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~Elfen-Lied999 Jun 26, 2012  Student General Artist
Excellent! Can you draw a picture of a yaoi? Avalon and Palladium. You're welcome. (Forgive me for my bad english)
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Mood: Joy ~Rose3212 Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Sure I could draw the pic and do a story for it too!
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~laviathan66 Jun 20, 2012
cute!
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~Rose3212 Jun 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you
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~DoReEgon Jun 12, 2012
If you don't mind, and I don't want to be rude here, may I give you some advice to help your base art get better? : )
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~Rose3212 Jun 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
sure.
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~DoReEgon Jun 12, 2012
Excellent. :)

Now, do you use MS Paint to edit your bases?
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~Rose3212 Jun 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes I do.
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~DoReEgon Jun 12, 2012
Might I suggest a better, more efficient alternative called Paint.Net? It's much smoother, and it has much more to work with! It even has layers. : )

Now, if I may, I will give you some tips for your basework.

For the hair, it looks as if it is glued on, or like a synthetic wig or cap. Perhaps you should add hair near the ear, to make it look attatched. You know how you (at least I'm assuming) have that patch/design of hair right next to the ear that attatches to the rest of your hair? I would suggest adding such a thing to your character. It looks more natural that way. I also would suggest if your character has longer hair, that some of it should go in front of the shoulders, and the rest of it put behind the shoulders to give it that happy medium. Also have the hair come off of her head at the top a tad more.

As for the clothes, they seem very skin-tight in a lot of your baseart. They also seem somewhat globby and shaped in an awkward way. Perhaps add a darker color to the outline of it. For example, this character has a white coat/outfit. So, I would suggest taking a gray-ish color, and then outlining the shape of the coat, and coloring the rest in with the white.

I would also suggest making creases in the clothing. Like, say you're wearing that coat. It would have creases or lines when you have your arms bent like the character in the picture.

I hope that I had helped in someway and didn't offend you at all, because I'm only trying to help you <3
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~Rose3212 Jun 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You helped me and didn't offend me.
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